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Chris Berens's avatar

Shame man, but at least you've got a Subaru. Best cars! Daisy, you are an excellent writer. Can't wait till you go pro. Do you think maybe, maybe, you could pull off a cowboy story?

Daisy Jones's avatar

Hello! Thank you, Kip. I agree about the Subaru. Also the cowboy story. But it would be my first rodeo. xx

ella's avatar

i'm a bit late to the party but this was a particularly good one!!

Daisy Jones's avatar

You make any party better. And thank you for the encouragement, snow angel.

Sally Argent's avatar

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Sorry you are sick and snowed in - enjoyed your writing - I hear much the same from

My son in Boston - sterkte - May the cold pass soon

Daisy Jones's avatar

Hi Sally! Sorry for the late reply. I think today marks our first proper day of Spring. It looks like there won't be any more snow until next Winter. I hope it's the same for your son. x

Daisy Jones's avatar

Hi Sally, I hope your son is okay. We are definitely through the worst now, I hope it's the same for him.

Eden Brown's avatar

Laughed out loud.

Kim Ward's avatar

Snow-crete is the best word I have heard to describe it... sorry for the sickness Daisy. Hope you feel better soon. I loved your skinny 'I am not from here' pavement path - I also use that phrase a fair bit and pavement instead of sidewalk!!

Daisy Jones's avatar

Did you do a written drivers test when you arrived here? Pavement is sidewalk and road is pavement. A misunderstanding could lead to a catastrophe ("Just walk on the pavement ...") On the subject of rules, I have learnt that it is Against The Law to not keep your section of sidewalk fully clear at all times. Fines are applicable. Even after we found out, we were lax.

The AI Architect's avatar

The day-by-day structure works really well here. Day Eight with the pavement shame is such a specific cultural pressure that only makes sense when living somewhere new. The contrast between your first snow experience (candy floss, glitter) and this one (cement mixture, freezer defrosting) captures how novelty wears off fast when practicality kicks in. Hope the cough clears upsoon.

Lucinda's avatar

Sorry you’re sick! Thank you for writing through it all. Vivid!! Xxx

Daisy Jones's avatar

Thank you, Lu. I didn't have the energy to write short. The length of this piece was an indication of my poopedness. She said, repeating the point. And then adding another sentence to underline that. And then another to draw attention to all of it. And so on.